Some people noted that we should add a typewriter sound effect to the credits, but my partner and I along with our teacher thought that having that sound effect throughout the intro would be distracting.
Others commented on how the last scene where the prisoner is running has shaky camera work. This was done purposefully though. We intended to have the camera moving a lot to add to the intensity and action of the scene so that the viewer felt as if they were struggling to run through the forest just like the prisoner was.
Audio is the one thing others said we should try to fix and is something I would like to fix myself. We tried filming with the built in microphone on the camera first, but the quality was just awful and really hard to understand. After that, we added an external microphone, but it was still not the exactly the way my partner and I would of preferred it to be. Messing with the audio in Premiere Pro, we were able to clean it up a little and make it sound clearer and louder. But overall, we were unable to get the audio exactly how we wanted it due to a lack of high tech audio equipment.
Lastly, few people commented on how the girl didn't react much when the prisoner came at her with a knife. This was also on purpose. We aimed at displaying how the girl was close to the prisoner since she didn't move at first because she trusted him and never would imagine him actually hurting her.
In the end, I'm really happy with how "The Run" intro turned out, and I'm glad the majority of our viewer's also found it very aesthetically pleasing.
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