Needed Improvements / Revisions

After getting feedback on the first edit of my film, I felt really encouraged by the work I had completed. I felt really encouraged by the work I had completed. The one thing I need to fix is the credits. Right now, the credits quickly scroll up  before the film begins. This gives the intro a more short film vibe rather than an intro to a normal length film. Cameron and I were unsure how to include the credits without disturbing the content of the film. We decided to make it so that the credits show through a typewriter effect that gives a feel of someone typing up the case information in the intro of the film. Overall, I'm pretty happy with how the intro turned out.